Blog response to revision of NOFO 2/07/11

Write a blog response documenting what changes you made and how they were incorporated into the new NOFO.
Think about rhetoric and rhetorical analysis. What is the purpose of this NOFO? Be specific.
Who is the audience? Be specific.

•  Victims of Domestic Abuse and local non profit looking into reducing domestic violence in our area.

What is the context?
What appeals and strategies are you using? Think about pathos, logos, ethos. What gives you credibility? How are you emotionally appealing to your audience? What are your logical appeals? Where could you add more information that would make your NOFO more effective? Be specific.
What still needs to be improved? (Provide specifics)
How can you help improve this process?
How can you peers improve this process?