Blog response to revision of NOFO 2/07/11

Write a blog response documenting what changes you made and how they were incorporated into the new NOFO.
Think about rhetoric and rhetorical analysis. What is the purpose of this NOFO? Be specific.
Who is the audience? Be specific.

•  Victims of Domestic Abuse and local non profit looking into reducing domestic violence in our area.

What is the context?
What appeals and strategies are you using? Think about pathos, logos, ethos. What gives you credibility? How are you emotionally appealing to your audience? What are your logical appeals? Where could you add more information that would make your NOFO more effective? Be specific.
What still needs to be improved? (Provide specifics)
How can you help improve this process?
How can you peers improve this process?

"The Nature of Rhetorical Criticism" and "Doing Rhetorical Criticism" Questions

What is this reading about? What is the argument?
How does it relate to writing/communication and what you've learned in ENC 1101?
What is interesting about this reading?
What is confusing about this reading?
Similarities and differences between the readings?

Blog response to revision of NOFO

We did a lot of changes to our NOFO. We had to look up DATA and make sure everything flow correctly.

Blog response to peers' blog responses

A lot of our peer responses were good ones. They wanted us to fix our title. They also wanted us to take some our paragraph. in the future, ill try to give more feedback on the content of the NOFO. Think about what they are tryin to to say and see if they are saying it correctly.

Blog response to in-class work

When it comes to our NOFO, we have to a lot. We have to fix the title, problem statement, expand out research paragraph, etc. Our title needs to be written to explain what we are doing. We have some information that has old Data in it that has to be deleted. At the moment, Aida and myself are currently working on researching other successful local non profit that were able to help domestic abuse victims. John and Rebekah are currently looking into our title and mission statement. Estefi will help with more research for our NOFO. We defiantly have our work cut out for us. Once will tear down the whole to near whole nofo and rebuild it, it should look great!

Faces of Homelessness

This event was really good (cont.)

Civil Engagement Fair Review

My review on the Civil engagement fair. I went to the engagement fair near the end of the day so some organizations may have been gone. That is where I signed up for more information on some clubs. Some clubs I got more information on were the out-club club, LASA, mentor programs, etc. I am really hoping that it becomes bigger next year. They should work the times better for student times that the organizations are out there. some people have classes along time on Monday and can not always make it out there.