Daily Writing 11/22/10 (mirror)

When I volunteer at the RHM, I wanted to help people. When I clean up the house and making sure everything is ready for the next patron saying at the house, I am doing my part of making sure they feel at home. The staff at the house is really nice, and they always give me thank you. So I know I am helping making the community a better place for everyone. I am always willing to help where I can.

/DAILY WRITING 11/17/2010

Steps:

1) Think of an idea/topic

• Homelessness
• Animal Cruelty
• Domestic Violence
• Ocean Pollution

2) Vote

·         Majority Rules

3) Choose Positions

·         Chair

·         Vice-Chair

·         Editor 

·         Etc.

4) Research

·         Cause and Effects

5) Bring Research into class

* For the past week, list everything each member of the team (including yourself) has contributed to the project. Be as specific as possible.

Myself-Edit

Frank-Ideas/chair

Max-- ideas

Amy—Housing/transportation

Olivia-- ideas

Crystal-- ideas

Kristian -- ideas

Anthony—ideas/money management

Jasmine--ideas

Arthur—ideas/Called ASAP


* For the past week, for each member of the team (including yourself), list the single most important contribution that s/he made to the project.
Myself-
Frank--
Max--

Amy—

Olivia
Crystal
Kristian --

Anthony—

Jasmine--
Arthur—

* What advice would you give to each of your teammates to help them improve their teamwork skills?

Frank--
Max--

Amy—

Olivia
Crystal
Kristian --

Anthony—

Jasmine--
Arthur—



* What needs to happen to make your draft ready to go to the LLS Coordinating Committee for review and approval?
--Review for grammar; look for errors when it comes to issues. Such as, one idea we had was getting a part time job. This can be except some jobs won’t hire if applicant is a criminal.

NOFO NOV. 10, 2010

I feel that our current draft of our NOFO for November 10, 2010 is coming alone good. We are setting a few ideas on what we thing we could lower the percentage of homeless by doing. These ideas range from houses, to part-time jobs. The main we will face is that fact most homeless face criminal charges. These charges are put them because at night, they have no place to go to the restroom. So they use the streets, which is illegal.

NOFO Draft 1 Review

Daily Writing (to be completed in your blog):
Look at the parts of a complete draft of a problem-solution paper on p. 389 of the McGraw-Hill Guide. Based on these criteria, assess your current NOFO draft. What criteria does it meet? What criteria do you need to work on? What pieces are missing completely?

I believe that our NOFO answer the problem we address. We should expand on what we want to accomplish. We state in the body information we need to show that we do have an issue on our hands. We need to include a plan on how we show divide the money.

SPB TOPIC SENTENCE (PERSONAL)

The Fall 2010 USF St. Petersburg Student Philanthropy Board Team Gold (USFSP SPB #11 GOLD) requests proposals that will lower water polluction in our local water supply in Pinellas and Hillsborough Counties that will assist clean up efforts, education, and harder punishments.