The changes I had made to my draft are that I included more stats to back up my ideas. I was comparing the fact oil is bad in our water as to plastic cups. One of my peers stated that he/she saw one was a solid and one was a liquid. Well, both was decay half-life in the hundreds of years. I really like my topic because this is a local issue and a world issue. I still may need to strengthen my counterpoints in my argument statements. This is so I can prove my arguement is correct. I could use help finding all the proper areas of getting my facts toward harbor pollution.
Also, I would like to know how to have interviews cited in my arguement essay.
Also, I would like to know how to have interviews cited in my arguement essay.
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