4/4/11 Community Writing Changes

First off, the reason why my paper is the way it is, is because, my initial draft was in that first paragraph. When it came time to make the changes, I put a page break in the page to show where my initial paragraph was and where the new draft was. This is something beneficial for me to look back and see the changes that i am making. Also, when it comes to the final draft, i can take the final draft and put in on a new page.